The notebook I once wrote in
With a note from her I'll keep for eternity
"Dear 'Anthony', I love you forever."
Sometimes the truth you know melts into infinity

*Wow what intense start. I love the flow. And the imagery is amazing as well*

Now my book of thoughts is torn
Lining every square inch of the house
She once laid here on my chest
My skin burns at the touch of the couch

*This is such a strong stanza. I love how you express your feelings here, I can relate to what you're saying.*

Get off before my will is gone
Keep my eyes from that silver frame
I'll live through my life
As soon as I realize I'm the one to blame

*You have such a way with words. I really liked this poem. The flow was constant and I love the imagery. Nice work. Nik*