Definitley shouldn't doubt, not those asians! lol =)

hehe

5/5

love it!

This was not one of the best that I have read by you. The ending left a sour taste in my mouth, haah. Not that I'm opposed to happy endings, it just seems the way in which it was approached seemed stale and uninteresting. I think this one should have maybe been extended by one or two stanzas. Usually I enjoy shorter poems, but in this case it feels rushed and uncaptivating.
"A car comes and a boy gets out"
The flow is off on this line. Maybe try:
"A car pulls up; a boy gets out"
Just a suggestion

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)