This is a great poem. in a way it describes what love can be like. well done on a great poem. 5/5

Kal

Well i guess you musta have written this based on your true experience. Well it's kindda funny how fate plays the strings on you...rushing through time... to meet somone but when we finally meet, we are at that moment where we are so close but yet so far.It's a really interesting write from you. It was certainly a delightful to read, keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5