by Not Enough Feb 24, 2009
category :
Life, society /
about society
You don't like us because we're not you |
I get the meaning though I am straight I have respect for individuality |
by Not Enough
I don't write in punctuation really. |
Nice write, the flow and rhyme were both good, but I think the flow could've been better with some punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry, it lets the reader know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow. |