Nice write, the flow and rhyme were both good, but I think the flow could've been better with some punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry, it lets the reader know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow.

Overall a well written piece of poetry, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

I don't write in punctuation really.
People usually just assume that when it's a next line there's usually a pause.

I get the meaning though I am straight I have respect for individuality
I've been beaten by a queen
well written