Chasing shadows

by Obscura   Feb 24, 2009


In the dark sanctuary of my mind where my darkest thoughts become alive i look upon the darkest one the things i left behind a choice a fools choice now i see.

A heart incomplete that cannot beat a lost lost that was not mine to keep.

A life destroyed by me a thought which i found hard to conceive it was not gods fault as i had lead myself to believe.

A existence of misery and pain which i caused and only had myself to blame i chose this fate i should have learned i sold my soul only to watch it burn and fall to ashes at my feet so as i go through my life chasing shadows of the past ill burn once more in hell saving the best for last.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    The title immediately caught my eye and the poem sucked me in and kept me there. all the emotions and darkness and sadness were running around me. I felt like I was there. Wonderfully written, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this. It's raw and doesn't hold back. I don't form creates a poem it's the words and you've got them here. Nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I like the words bro, but I think it needs some form. I kept getting lost. Keep writing,I feel it.

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