I like the words bro, but I think it needs some form. I kept getting lost. Keep writing,I feel it.

I like this. It's raw and doesn't hold back. I don't form creates a poem it's the words and you've got them here. Nice work. Shanik

The title immediately caught my eye and the poem sucked me in and kept me there. all the emotions and darkness and sadness were running around me. I felt like I was there. Wonderfully written, 5/5. Em