by Jenni Marie
"Lend me your eyes tonight." |
by Teria
:) This poem made me smile, darling. You did a wonderful job with it. I adored the details/descriptions through-out the poem and the way you've written it. A lot of it seems to be a bit ironic (silent strings,etc) and I love that. Another thing I liked about it was the first stanza. The whole 'termites at work' and 'rotting facade' was quite clever. The entire poem is quite clever. |
This was beautifullie writen. it sounded more like a song to me then a poem idky ask my mind. it just did and it would make a amzing song well to me. i like it. once again you did a great job. |