Wow, Libby! Your rhyming! That was awesome!

You're almost as good as me ;)

This stanza here:

Waking in the early hours
Before the sun has risen
Loneliness devours
but through it a new hope arisen

Very pretty but the flow was a little off and you almost rhymed the same word.

Besides that, wow. Honestly, (not saying this just because you're my friend) I'm really really really jealous. But proud of you aswell. You have an amazing talent. I can't wait to read your next one. They just keep on coming and coming!

luv you oodles
-mandy :)

oh ya, 5/5!

Geez louize... I loved your rhyming in that one. The last stanza was amazing, I loved how you ended it. Keep it up!! 5/5!