Dark Savior

by Gasttlee   Feb 25, 2009


He stands tall and bright
never yielding to defeat.

He doesn't back down
or turn his back.

His face is bold
with an iron fist.

His trust
will forever be unparalleled.

Like stallions,
he charges forward
with great strength.

From the echoes of our hearts
and the ears of our minds
these words will forever ring,
"YES WE CAN, YES WE CAN!"

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  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    The last stanza poures out words of hopes. Sometimes when things seems like there is no way out, when we'd someone behind us to encourage us, our faith grows. Well done, kell

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow, that's great.I love that last line. I love how no matter what nothing will knock him down I reallly like that concept. Remindes me of myself. Good job.

    Soda E>

  • 15 years ago

    by Krathia

    I love the surprise ending! At first I thought it was some masked and caped hero in the night, but the last line was a blow to my mind. YES WE DID! Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Very well written poem
    Interesting
    And on a very worthwhile subject
    I really enjoyed this

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