Comments : Dark Savior

  • 15 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Very well written poem
    Interesting
    And on a very worthwhile subject
    I really enjoyed this

  • 15 years ago

    by Krathia

    I love the surprise ending! At first I thought it was some masked and caped hero in the night, but the last line was a blow to my mind. YES WE DID! Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow, that's great.I love that last line. I love how no matter what nothing will knock him down I reallly like that concept. Remindes me of myself. Good job.

    Soda E>

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    The last stanza poures out words of hopes. Sometimes when things seems like there is no way out, when we'd someone behind us to encourage us, our faith grows. Well done, kell