by Cantchangeme
Very well written poem |
by Krathia
I love the surprise ending! At first I thought it was some masked and caped hero in the night, but the last line was a blow to my mind. YES WE DID! Good work. |
by Not Enough
Wow, that's great.I love that last line. I love how no matter what nothing will knock him down I reallly like that concept. Remindes me of myself. Good job. |
by kelleyana
The last stanza poures out words of hopes. Sometimes when things seems like there is no way out, when we'd someone behind us to encourage us, our faith grows. Well done, kell |