Lost Beneath the Frost

by Raychil   Feb 25, 2009


Today something was lost
Lost beneath the deathly frost
Frost that seeped to the core
Core of life and still more

More than normal eyes can see
See past the pile of debris
Debris that stretches into the soul
Soul that will never again be whole

Whole, together, completely sane
Sane though, was before the pain
Pain that came without warning
Warning useless by the morning

Morning came to clear the night
Night that wouldn't free the light
Light that could have warmed the cold
Cold that won't release its hold

Hold on the heart, barely beating
Beating away while life is retreating
Retreating until its forever lost
Lost beneath the deathly frost.

*My first try at loop poetry*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Yea, I've also never read a 'loop' poem before, but it was very inspiring, and you made it look so easy. I want to give it a try now. It was amazingly beautiful. You've improved so much since last time I was on here, Its always a joy to read your poems.
    <3

  • 15 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Yea, I've also never read a 'loop' poem before, but it was very inspiring, and you made it look so easy. I want to give it a try now. It was amazingly beautiful. You've improved so much since last time I was on here, Its always a joy to read your poems.
    <3

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