by Lady Nik Feb 25, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Everything I am |
by AnCi
Amazing!! |
Great job. I liked reading this one alot. It has a nice flow and the repetition works wonders on the impact of the emotions and words on the reader. Great work Keep it up. |
WOWZA I LOVED THIS POEM ITS ALL THAT IM GOIN THREW N WELL I HOPE TO SEE MORE LIKE THESE WELL TATA FOR NOW LOL |
by annamarie
I..LOVE...THIS...POEM!!LOL!I REALLY DO IT JUST SCREAMS OUT MY NAME AND EXACTLY HOW IM FEELING!YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!GOD BLESS YOU!=] |
by benjamin
Excelent poem.. i love the repeats. it makes what your saying stronger.. :) .. rhyming is great it just flows :) haha 5**s :) |