The day the light went out

by Obscura   Feb 25, 2009


A long time ago before i felt so much pain i met you and i was never the same i saw the beauty that would shame the brightest flower you where the light in my darkest hour but i drifted away into a other life i missed you badly i wanted to die

5 years on we meet once again you found someone I'm only a friend i told you how i felt after all this time you said you felt the same all that time ago but I'm with someone else now i guess ill never know if we could have been together

out of the fire i tried to save the embers but they only go out before i try the fires dead now and cannot relight you still are the light of my life in a world of darkness i cannot overcome you i cannot pass this

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Such a beautiful portrayal of lost love. It's ashame when we don't know what we had until it's gone because usually it's always too late. Wonderfull written with lots of emotion. 5/5, Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    In one word - Beautiful !!!
    I can totally relate to this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nicely written. Intense, and powerful. I like it, it really describes true emotion, and yet its simply written. I liked that.

  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    That was well written i love it

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Obscura