It is not really a matter of to be or not to be
It is a matter of without you I don't want to be

^^ These two lines really hit home for me, Moucha! This is what it is all about when you no longer have a home in someones heart...you no longer want to exist without that home...and yet..you have to go on, my dear friend:/
Well, we have each other, don't we? I will never let you fall, Charbel Jamous:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I liked how you structured the poem and its rhythm. It was refreshing to see something like this. Each line had a specific meaning and provided a unique way to state things. Other than the ending being a bit abrupt the poem was written well.

"I can fill my empty heart with all this hot rain
But nothing on earth can make me feel less pain"

Your words here really got to me and made me feel as sad as you probably did when you wrote them. Because many times in life we try to fill out hearts because they are empty yet although full we cannot forget the marks that time leave on them.
It is not really a matter of to be or not to be
It is a matter of without you I don't want to be"

And here you really went big with your words and strong emotion. The way you expressed how you feel using these phrases was very clever and I think my favorite part of the poem.

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Great poem keep it up!

This poem is really deep with it's meaning...

I feel with no heart, If only this part I can give away
I hate or love, I don't really have much to say

-I understand what you're trying to say here...there isn't any more emotion in your heart...all the senses is numb to your touch leaving you with nothing but emptiness

Overall you did a wonderful job, i really felt the emotions that you had display

5/5

Few of the lines are very well written. Overall it's nice reading. Well done.

Amazing & very deep i loved it sweetie,

keep up the great work;)