I love this poem great job 5/5

Very very good job

I loved this piece. It was so calming and just out there. It helped show the reader the real bliss that comes with not living on this planet. By leaving all the horrible things in this world. I liked the rhyming too. This poem just seemed to work for me. Nice word choice too by the way.
5/5

Wow this poem was filled with such truth and meaning! It truly shined light on the problems facing our world today and how sometimes we just wish to escape them. I loved your rhyme because it flowed flawlessly and didnt seem forced to me. Your use of imagery was also quite effective in setting the scene throughout the whole piece. Sometimes people are afraid to speak the truth about what the see but I'm glad to have read this poem because it should open some peoples eyes.

Well done.
*5/5*