Here is another example of a good poem. I didnt think the subject was as defined as it should have been, but I like the open-ness of the poem. It seemed to suggest the imagery without defining it. The poem was left open more for me to fill the scene.

I wasnt quite sure what the poem was actaully about, but it didnt really seem to matter. It was just a nice poem to read.

Again, I did not leave a vote; I wanted to see what others thought of it.

Keep writing.