Lonely Lonely Girl (version A)

I see right through your facade
You're as transparent as a ghost
What cost will you pay
To please most

Make-up covered face
Hiding all your flaws
But nothing can mask your inside
That craves for something more

Lonely, lonely little girl
You have the world in your hands
People love you for your possessions
But yet alone you still stand

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This is one version the other version I wrote is lonely lonely little girl version B. Please tell me which one is better.