I really enjoyed this. I felt so much when I read this. Very emotional. Keep it up. Shanik

I had to reread this piece a few times....But I did figure it out. very well written. I love the way you put it into poetry [music/love] well done.

Reading it a few times help for the comment above and yes this was a terrific poem. The flow was good and the emotion as well has been felt by many but don't be discouraged. The rhyme was good all throughout and you did another great job.

I like the way you put your sorrow to words. It all came through, even though I read it twice before I fully understood it all. But, it deserves to be reread. It's not tiring at all. Very good piece. Very good work.