So I'll say good night.

I can feel your heat,
But I feel defeat,
There is no way out,
Can't scream or shout.
I've lost the fight,
So I'll say good night.
I've given you all of me,
Believed in meant to be's.
Everything you say is the same,
And there is no one to blame.
I've lost the fight,
So I'll say good night.
And as I walk out the door,
The rain will start to pour,
So no one can see my tears,
And I can scream while no one hears.
I've lost the fight,
So I'll say good night.
I let you be my everything,
Made sure to wear your ring,
I can't hide the tears on my cheek,
Shaking so bad I can't even speak,
I've lost the fight,
So I'll say good night.
Good-bye to you,
And everything we went through,
All the pain,
Easily hidden by the rain.
I've lost the fight,
So I'll say good night.
I can't even bring myself to say,
That I hate you every day,
Because in my heart I still love you,
Even after what you put me through.
But I've lost the fight,
So I'll say Good night

* I haven't written any good poetry and a while and I would like some help on what i could improve, it would be greatly appreciated*