Nice heartfelt write, If I could get past all the, "you" "me" "I" "her" I know it is hard to write a "love" poem without using such vocabulary, however; if you could, this would be an outstanding write and the same goes for the rest of the cliche love writting people do.

The overall meaning behind the poem however was a setiment in it's own, very well thought out like most of your poems, but again as I stated in a different comment, there is no punctuation at all. Punctuation is very important in poetry since it allows the reader to know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow.

Overall a well written poem...and with some work it can be fantastic.

Peace, Joe

I really like this poem. It was heartfelt and the way the words flow was outstanding. I caught myself catching my breath a few times, because of how beautiful I thought this poem was. Depending on the perspective, this piece was sad, but happy. Like in the poets perspective, it's kind of sad, because he can't build up the courage to talk to the girl of his dreams. But if in the girl's perspective, it's flattering. Idkk, I think I'm mumbling now. lol But really, amazing write :] 5/5