by Michael D Nalley Feb 26, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
What can I write about grace not written before? |
For one thing, I really enjoyed the opening line. Not just because it's a question, but it's kind of a rhetorical question at that. I couldn't think of an answer to it, and it doesn't seem like the narrator was either. |
by Kaila
I enjoyed this piece a lot. I did especially like the rhyming in this piece. It helped flow the story along well. One thing though is I wonder why you put question marks after questions but not after the end of each complete thought? It kind have threw me off. Overall nice poem and I enjoyed it |
This is a great poem it says alot very meaningful!!! 5/5 |