Comments : Remembering Childhood

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Even though you state that this was a five minute right, I got the feeling that it wasn't completed. I think you could have expanded more on it. I did like it though; your rhymes were a little off in the first and last stanza, but overall, I thought it was well-written. I would like to see it added to, however.

    Skye