Lust. (Pleiades)

Wowwww! I really like this. It's short, but it lacks nothing. Word choice is beautiful, and it flows wonderfully. I like the form, as well, though I'm certain it's something I would fail miserably at. Haha. Kudos on finding so many good L words. :P

5/5
Briana

[thanks for the comment, by the way! :)]

This was excellent, I find it really hard to do pleiades. You seem to master every form you write. I loved the sensual language you used here, it'd be really nice to read aloud.

'Lascivious desires emerge'

That was fantastic, really nice choice of words here.

I really enjoyed this, I was gonna pull more bits out but I think it's too short to do that.

Excellent!!

Very fantastic<3
seems difficult :S
something im going to try tho (=
good job!

Indeed a very beautiful poem, Temps:)

You used so many beauitful words and manged to mould them into an interesting read!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid