Comments : Lust. (Pleiades)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Indeed a very beautiful poem, Temps:)

    You used so many beauitful words and manged to mould them into an interesting read!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Very fantastic<3
    seems difficult :S
    something im going to try tho (=
    good job!

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This was excellent, I find it really hard to do pleiades. You seem to master every form you write. I loved the sensual language you used here, it'd be really nice to read aloud.

    'Lascivious desires emerge'

    That was fantastic, really nice choice of words here.

    I really enjoyed this, I was gonna pull more bits out but I think it's too short to do that.

    Excellent!!

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Wowwww! I really like this. It's short, but it lacks nothing. Word choice is beautiful, and it flows wonderfully. I like the form, as well, though I'm certain it's something I would fail miserably at. Haha. Kudos on finding so many good L words. :P

    5/5
    Briana

    [thanks for the comment, by the way! :)]