I remember childhood
The things we used to do
How I used to laugh and play
And just have fun with you

^I remember this with my bestf "loser" his nickname from me. how we would laugh all the time we would hang out it was heaven with him. a lovely way of openin ur poem to us here. nicely done =]

I remember childhood
When you blamed me for all your crimes
Then you'd play with our nephews
While I served your time-out times

^this part made me laugh remembering that my lil bro does this to me. still does. IM the one getting in trouble not him. Grrr... anger n frustation wen i do but then time flies we laugh bout it. i like this part. flow very nice as well

I remember childhood
And all your tomboy acts
The way you picked up bugs and dirt
Our 'sisters always' pacts

^hmm.... i like this.

I remember childhood
When you still cared when I cried
Back when you'd still hug me
Before that part of you died

^awwwwwwwwww... this so trulie sad. the last stanzal here was very deep and dark n heartbreaking. wow. powerful words u use.

I remember childhood
My carefree older sister
The one who talked till we fell asleep
And now I kind of miss her

^time change the best things in people it sucks at times. =(

I remember childhood
Playmobiles and Barbie fun
Playing school and make-believe
Until childhood was done

^awww... this reminded me of my lil bro again. wen we were like that no make up nope nope dnt do that. lol nope we hardlie talk, play video n stuff mostly just fight with each other which hurts like a....

I remember childhood
Those pre-adolescent years
When everything I said was wrong
And you were the cause of my tears

^aww... very meaning n sad part.

I remember childhood
The years nothing stayed the same
When your emotions went up and down
And you decided I was lame

^dang this was wow. this person thought u were lame naw u r not. ur word have a way of tellin there story if u know what im sayin. cuz i tend to confuse ppl a lot. lol

I remember childhood
But we're both older than we were
We've grown up and grown away
That's one thing I know for sure

^yup, we are grow up sumtime even wen we dnt want to. i know i dnt but i also know i will

I remember childhood
Those little girls who thought they had it all
The same girls who look at their world crashing down
Unable to help the other not fall

^i like it. i wouldnt change a thing

I remember childhood
When Mom and Dad were always there
Lifting us up and bringing us down
So we knew they'd always care

^parents always do that i hate that. but still they care.

I remember childhood
And the day I watched that old cat die
I recall having to tell you the news
It was one of the last times I've seen you cry

^sorta lost me here.

I remember childhood
When I knew what was in your heart
I never knew that growing up to you
Meant we would drift apart

^awww.. simple words but very touchin n sad.

I remember childhood
The way it used to be
Before you went to this other place
Where there was no room for me

^last line was indeed sumthin i can relate to. being left behind cuz sumone is headed of you.

I remember childhood
And all the times we'd fight
Finding pleasure in the fact
That we would always end up alright

^yup yup true n laugh bout it in the end n joke around n it happens all again like a weird mad cycle.

I remember childhood
And I don't want to say goodbye
Are you going to leave just like that?
Or should we give us one more try?

^questions love poems with questions =) makes me think lol

I remember childhood
When I knew I couldn't hide
From my sister's way of knowing me
And all I kept inside

^hide and go seek that poped in my mind wen i read this lol

I remember childhood
All the things we used to do
I'm trying to find my sister again
Some days I don't see her in you

^OH Wow this was very powerful and so sad.

I remember childhood...

Walk with me down memory lane.

Copyright 2009 S. Sieglaff

^nice way of ending it. i libut!!! amazin job
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy