I Want to

by Jim McMillen the man within   Feb 27, 2009


Well I wrote a poem today,
It is the first I have written since 9-3-08
I hope you like it ....It was written from a comfortable place I did not expect time to allow me to be ,
So I think I can just relax and enjoy my stay here for
awhile.
Lately I have been finding myself smiling for no reason at all and I notice my
eyes are a little wet too , and I think:-- thats ok, it is a slow , sweet release and it is just what I need , so relax and enjoy it for its time
..........................................
I am not a broken tuning fork anymore, I know because I can feel the harmony
vibrate and resonate all around me ...........
When you read it, I hope you relax and feel it too..........Jim

I Want to
2-26-2009

I Want to ........Hold you ............ Before I've even touched you.
I Want to.........Feel you ............ Like I've never felt before.
I Want to ........Warm you ..........Until you no longer remember the cold.
I Want to.........Meet you ........... In your darkest moment , To guide you where you want to be.
I Want to.........Catch you...........The moment you start to fall.
I Want to.........Free you ............To reach heights you've never known.
I Want to ........Take you.............Into a love you've never Felt.
I Want to.........Give you..............Whatever time you need , To know
it's where you want to be.
I Want to ........Make you............Smile for no reason at all.
I Want to.........Let you................Know ......I Only Want To Be Good To
You
I Want to.........See you ..............Walking by my side.
I Want to.........Smell you............On The pillow where I lay my Head.
But for now , All I really want to do is
........................................................
I Want to.........Thank you...........For Just Being Who You Are, I could Not Ask For More..........Than The peaceful , Easy feeling , I've already found
with you....Jim

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    THis is indeed something different and at the
    same time it is fiiled with such tender feelings..really really nice read :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A BEAUTIFULY written piece. Very different.. but outstanding! I really enjoyed this poem of love... and am looking forward to reading more of your poems :]
    LOL,
    Olwin.

    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica Kelsey

    That was so beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well Jim, I will be honest with you. When I opened up the page, I thought to myself: what's this? But as I read it, I saw the sincerity in your words and sometimes the message can be more important then the format..so all in all it was a great poem after all:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    I didn't really favor the structure of the poem but it was heart felt. Great poem indeed (: