Can't Take My Eyes Of You (Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Feb 27, 2009


Gazing at you adorably, so lost in those eyes
Overwhelmed with love, can't take my eyes of you
Every day spent with you brings a pleasant surprise
Gazing at you adorably, so lost in those eyes
Euphoric you made your way in, saw through my disguise
Always in my heart and thoughts, stuck like a tattoo
Gazing at you adorably, so lost in those eyes
Overwhelmed with love, can't take my eyes of you

Triolet:
Consists of 8 lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th repeat.
The 2nd and 8th repeat as well.
Rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 15 years ago

    by xToBeWithYoux

    Wow, this is a beautiful poem, so deep and it brings so many images into my mind. One little thing - should 'of' be 'off'? Might not be, just didn't look right :)

    Overall this is lovely, a great read 5/5

    Keep writing,
    Emily :)

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