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by Jenni Marie Feb 27, 2009 category : Friendship, family / broken friendship
Breaking countless promises Never knew you were selfish Using everyone you "love," Don't need friends like you Plastering on pretty smiles But looks can be deceiving Standing in your false glory Think you're the victim Used to be closest of friends Can't take your crap anymore Wont help yourself; how can I? Get out of my life**Doditsu-Japanese form consisting of one four lined, non rhyming stanza, syllables going 7-7-7-5. **For A Contest**
by Faithless
Breaking countless promises Never knew you were selfish Using everyone you "love," Don't need friends like you -Wow what a great opening I can feel the rage and anger you have at this 'friend' of yours. Shedding his truth about his true colours Plastering on pretty smiles But looks can be deceiving Standing in your false glory Think you're the victim -Well here you have depicted the two faced that this person has and how he always show a false facade infront of others Used to be closest of friends Can't take your crap anymore Wont help yourself; how can I? Get out of my life -surpassing the limit of taking his crap, just boils you to the point where you which he didn't exist Overall I like the hidden anger and how it's being poured out Excellent Job 5/5