Comments : Playing The Victim (Triple Doditsu)

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Breaking countless promises
    Never knew you were selfish
    Using everyone you "love,"
    Don't need friends like you

    -Wow what a great opening I can feel the rage and anger you have at this 'friend' of yours. Shedding his truth about his true colours

    Plastering on pretty smiles
    But looks can be deceiving
    Standing in your false glory
    Think you're the victim

    -Well here you have depicted the two faced that this person has and how he always show a false facade infront of others

    Used to be closest of friends
    Can't take your crap anymore
    Wont help yourself; how can I?
    Get out of my life

    -surpassing the limit of taking his crap, just boils you to the point where you which he didn't exist

    Overall I like the hidden anger and how it's being poured out

    Excellent Job
    5/5