Fuk, thats really good.
I feel what yu are actually saying,
I think this everyday, but yu just put it into a poem :)

5/5

I thought the title was excellent, and finding it again at the end of your poem was great.
A bit confusing at first.. but following along you find the emotion put in there. I like the metaphors you put in, simple, but enough to give the image wanted
keep writing ^^

5/5

Love it <3