Boulevard of broken dreams

Nice poem Ingrid!
Such well put together, beautil words here, describing the age old battle between Love and logical reasoning! The contest that has gone on since mankind first came onto the planet.
I love your verses 'On the boulevard of broken dreams, where hope meets harsh reality', but in truth I love all of them!
Well penned Ingrid!

So amazing written ..beautiful poem!!
^_^

That was a very beautifuly expressed poem.

"by time and tender encounters
gets swept away by the mighty arms
of logic and reasoning,
natural enemies of romantic love"

This part really caught my attention! I love the wording here, as well as the very last line of the poem.

You're poems always create a very realistic visual effect.

Wonderful write!!!

mandy :)

I like the word choice in this piece. I think it would flow better if you changed this line:

where hope meets with harsh reality - Just remove the "with". I also think it should be broken up into stanzas as opposed to all just running together. It was however still nicely done.

I agree with the above comments. The titale caught my eye because i love the song. But This is going into my favorites. It was simple amazing. It was so powerful and descriptive. Great work. 5/5