by The Prince
I absolutely love dark poems, they're my favourite kind. Narrative poems are always tricky. The title was excellent and drew me in. |
by Sora
You have a wonderful talent. this poem blew me away. very deep and poetic. i loved the ending the most. it made me feel like i wanted to keep reading but your poem had ended. all in all keep writing. you'll go far. 5/5. |
by Deana
A very interesting idea, you handled it very well. A very intriguing write, mysterious and dark. outstanding! |
by Atomic
I read this in the thread in our group and absolutely loved it! |