by I Dont Care Bear Feb 28, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Tears run down my face |
I find it hard to understand why in 779 visits no one actually seems to have commented or voted only me. As in our lives we all have or will loose someone we loved and this poem certainly gets across your message there is definitely room for improvement but I enjoy its meter and flow. A very emotion offering full of want and remorse well written Ray S |