Comments : Read My Body Language

  • 15 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    **In my flesh a ruby line is traced,
    At this moment, I feel so disgraced
    But I have to finish this awful sin,
    Carve the words into my skin

    Read the words with your own eyes,
    Will you finally understand my cries?
    Will you save me from this horrible fate,
    Or will you allow me to use my silver blade?

    Whatever you do, whatever you don't,
    I will forever and always be alone
    These are my painful scars and scrapes,
    That form my life in painful shapes.**

    is my fav parts cus i have done that after i would cut i would write things i could tell people i feel ur pain if u need to talk im here 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    I'm reading your body language, very nice job! haha =]

    5/5

    great emotion, perfect ryme and flow!