by Melpomene Mar 1, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A veil which spreads, |
Nonrhythmic but contained, unusual and I thought at first not to my taste, so I gave you the benefit of the doubt and reread. I read it twice more and it opened up to me like a new book, fresh and full of imagery evoking vibrant visions of something new in a love poem, refreshing and not over wordy very clever and well put together 5/5 RayS |
That was so beautiful!! :) I do not know what to say, honestly, because I'm out of words, really. You did a fantastic job on this, it's no wonder you're a brilliant poet. :) I love your works. |
by The Prince
Nice to see something new from you. |