You
by Eliza Mar 1, 2009
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One look of torture, and one look of pain. I look into your eyes and I lose the sane. Why part don't you get? I take the blame. With you and your love, its all the same. |
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15 years ago
by Kuro
It's nice and short. i liked how it flowed well and was easy to read, but because it is so short, its kinda hard to understand how you're feeling. it was kinda hard to understand what it was really about.
still, from what i read, i really liked. but next time, don't stop. keep going. let it out and release how you really feel.
