by Polaroid Mar 2, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Broken wax crayons |
by Mr Anonymous
Rhyming-scheme-wise, thats one of my new favorites. It was a fun poem to read, and the flow worked really well. Do not know how you do it. Keep it up tho! |
by mandy
Very beautiful. You're rhyming seemed a little blan in this poem, like you were running out of things to write. But it was still very well written, 5/5. |