by Krathia Mar 2, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I find it hard to breathe in silence, |
by The Prince
If you read this, then read Convergence, you wouldn't know it's from the same writer. |
Ooh this is my favourite out of the three of yours that I've read today. |
by Krista
I absolutley loved loved loved this poem! I really liked the ending of the stanzas, the words in the parenthesis being like a true thought contradicting the penned before. I loved your word choice on this. I liked the idea behind it also. I thought it was very well penned, and the title was perfect for this poem. |
Ooooo love the ending :-) the flow of the last stanza seemed different than the rest of the poem though. |
by Hatori
I absolutely love the way you changed the single word in each first line of the stanza's. It gave this poem more emotion and allowed the reader to feek like they were there witnessing every thought. |