Hey this is really cool. it was cool how you talked about sidewalks not judging you and stuff. i love the incorporation to running obviously because i enjoy running so its relatable to me. the ending was motivational too when you paralleled emotional pain with physical pain, saying to run through it and it wont hurt anymore. thats hard to do sometimes but its so true. cool beans Kalli

When I read your poems or your latest ones I realize that both come to the point of "an end" of something. It really makes you think. Keep it up!!

I know it's a poem of running away from one's worries but it's worded in such a surreal way. It makes me smile. It captures the average teens thoughts of denial. It makes me examine the things i did and if it aided to an escape of ones self.

You took a very unique look at an object we encounter everyday! I love what you did with this poem! This is like nothing i have ever read and is amazing work!!! 5/5