If I were to die today

By StarGirl

If I were to die today

I'd like to say things are the same as they used to be way back then.
But I couldn't make myself believe it.

I still love you, and if
I were to die today, you should know....

I loved you with ever breath, with every hear breaking cry, every spell woven smile
and every ever lasting mile.

So if I were to die today Please know that I'm okay with a smile on my face
as I leave this place

I whisper... I love you still.

I loved you with every breath, with every ear breaking cry, every spell woven smile
and every everlasting mile.

It seems a bit shallow to point out word processing while you are baring your soul but is this line is smoother?

Overall it is a touching love poem