This was a beautiful poem from you my friend. It's adorable without being too tacky, it's sweet without being too sickly, you got all the components right, and it was thouroughly an enjoyable read. It made me smile while I read it:

'Black makeup, high heeled boots and studs of chrome
Your fearsome image was betrayed at home'

It was just so nice to see a father pay a poetic dedication to his little girl.

Really enjoyed it, well done.

Danny

OH wow, what a touching write for your daughter. I hope you share this with her, its such a beautiful dedication Grant.
Well done.

5/5.

Awww! This was so sweet. Its interesting to see a girl growing up through her fathers eyes. All the different stages that you see.
You have perfected this poem, with exactly the right amount of humour and love. I really enjoyed reading it.
5/5

How endearing and sweet this dedication is, Grant:)
I always wondered how it would be to have a little girl, I probably would have spoiled her silly, he he.
Reading your verse, I believe this must be a very beautiful and sweet girl:)
Congrats on her birthday!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This is a very nice poem dedication to your daughter. Though I think you have presented the poem well from a father's point of view. Though they have areadly reached adulthood, they will forever be your lil angel you once carried in your arms. I love the way you end this poem, though it's hard to let her go but u still wish her all the best cause you know that it's time for her to spread her wings and fly.It was certainly a delightful to read, im sure your daughter would love this poem and would carry with her wherever she goes.

Excellent Job
5/5

Aww.. such a sweet, tender write. A beautiful dedication, full of love and pride! I loved it :]