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by Still Slightly Broken Mar 3, 2009
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15 years ago
I thought this was a very good piece, indeed. In fact, my only real problem with it, is that at points, the flow was broken by the loss of structure, but in general, I loved it! It was simplistic, and real. I liked the style of which you chose to make the structure. It was all very good.
Brad
