Invaded

by Melissa   Mar 3, 2009


Yesterday
secure abaft a palisade
of language and punctuation,
I sat
scribbling in vain

and today
there's a strange noun
lurking around my poetry

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lyn

    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CLEVER.
    Well done. This poem is well to the fore not abaft. I had to look it up in the dictionary so you educated me today!!!!!!! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    Is it abaft? :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short but just enough. i love your word choice in this piece. Nicely done.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    Wow, this was incredibly unique. Not much words I can say for such a small piece, just my praise for writing it. Excellent. I loved the little touch at the end, and the title was suited nicely. Well done!

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