Wow, this was incredibly unique. Not much words I can say for such a small piece, just my praise for writing it. Excellent. I loved the little touch at the end, and the title was suited nicely. Well done!

Short but just enough. i love your word choice in this piece. Nicely done.

Is it abaft? :-)

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CLEVER.
Well done. This poem is well to the fore not abaft. I had to look it up in the dictionary so you educated me today!!!!!!! :)