Comments : Fix my broken wings

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    What a beautiful love poem! When someone comes into our lives and rescues us from the horror what our life has become is one of the lifes wonderful miracles and you described that wonderfully here. Your use of flow and rhyme was great and I could tell your words came straight from your heart.

    Well done!
    *5/5* :]