Kevin this just broke my heart! It was filled with so much pain and when you said you dont have the desire to live, I just wanted to give you the biggest hug and say there is always a reason to live. Things might be bad now but they will get better. It might not seem like it now but things wont be bad for long.

The flow here was just flawless and the emotion felt real and from the heart. You brought everything to life for me and I felt as I was taking a tour in your mind seeing life through your eyes. That way of writing was very effective in getting your message across.

Well done!
*5/5* :]