Snow {Oddquain}

by BREEawNUHH   Mar 3, 2009


** This is my first attempt at the form (found on ShadowPoetry.com, description at the bottom). Constructive criticism is always welcome! :)

Snow
gently falls
to the ground, kids play
making snow angels, laughing
loud

** Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed like so: 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Shank **

Briana Coulter
03.03.09

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Brilliant. Just brilliant.
    I love it so much!! :)
    [5/5]
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A simple thought, of snow and how the children play in the snow, making snow angels.. a simple poem, yet its nice to see a form not often seen around here out there. I was just going to try this form the other day, I'm glad to see you tried it. A good poem to get back on track of writing, I hope you continue to write. :]

    Keep writing.
    5/5.

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