by Jenni Marie Mar 4, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Ironic isn't it? That when words fail music speaks |
by DarkLight
I love it. amazing, |
by RecycleBin
I really like this piece... |
Wow. I never thought of writing poem the way u just did. this is great. I felt the first 2 stanzas needed a little work but its great besides that. a little work as a coma in a different place or re word it a bit, but nice write..5/5 |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
Excellent piece of poetry! I liked the flow, the emotions and the ending lines...but it doesn't mean that I didn't like the other lines...! Good job! |
by AJ
First off, I love the repetition of "Ironic isn't it?"it gave the poem a full loop, providing closure and yet it leaves it open to where you could continue the poem from his eyes. |