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by Jeri Jun 11, 2004 category : Life, society / inspirational
Give me a chance To learn to love To love to live To live to leave To leave when my time comes Give me a chance To hate to hear To hear the hurt The hurt the hug The hug will mend Give me a chance To ache to argue To argue to act To act to abide To abide the laws I cannot break Give me a chance To go to grow To grow to get To get the gift The gift of life Give me a chance To care to come To come to create To create the curse The curse that owns me Give me a chance To sing to see To see the sky The sky that stares That stares at my mistakes Give me a chance To dare to dream To dream to do To do the dance The dance of life Give me a chance To mend and make And make them meet Them meet the mock The mock that chases me Give me a chance To jump to join To join to jive To jive and not jeer Not jeer at others mistakes Give me a chance
by BaybeBlew
Hey I liked your poem. It had a really cool structure behind it. It could use a bit of work, but overall i liked it. Hope you'll keep writing, cause i'll keep reading. Luv, -Blue ^_~